Category: Writers Block
Just imagine the stars,how bright they must be tonight, magnified by the teardrops, brought forth by all our pain. It's amazing how cruel life can be,and how heavy her hand can feel. All we want to do is smile,but our tears fall like rain.There's no time for holding these days nor a second for a simple kiss,just the time to stare at the moon while crying out in vain. All we need is each other to make it all go away,like an emotional drug that will subdue the pain. It's just so hardto keep an open heart when the world is out to harm you. But without your gentle words,its a struggle to stay sane. So as I roam the darkness I'll be calling out your name. Haunting all of our demons until they've all been slain.
That was really good. I like the rhyming in it, it's cool, and it makes sense. It's so sad!
Cheers well I like morbid poetry its deeper and deals more with the mind...which is always interesting
The imagery! Excellent! Excellent!
Wow ! And, I say? Here, Here. Know the feeling well.
its good. well said.
thank you all I'm touched..smile
its excelent. its touch my heart deeply. feel like crying.
Goblin I loved it!!!! It is really great!!!!!! I really like it.